atticusthebum's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I attempt Madness toons]

Great

Pretty good, here's some tips:
+ Increase Framerate
+ Muzzle Flash
+ Bullet tracers should be white or non existent
+ Make sure the bullets look they come from the gun
+ Draw the blood while zoomed in to at least 800% to make it look seksy
+ Work on an overall color scheme, with madness you'll probably want darker, more saturated colors

It looks like you took your time on this, which is great. The more time spent the better it becomes!

bonecollecta responds:

Thanks for the advice. I'll do my best to do the best :)

[Counter-Strike Encounter]

ZERO

Good job you watched a classic "Hijack Vent" video and made it into a flash. Considering there was no actual animation in it the sounds are recycle from other things, and there's not even a preloader you get my 0/10.

Dano1138 responds:

OK this was a video I made that I just converted into flash
Just want to know to make my videos better.
Please explain what is a Hijack Vent

[Waldo]

Great

Everything was good. Art, style, voice acting, and plot. I really laughed hard.

And I really can't stand when people say it's too short, if it gets the message across then who cares?

pawlakt responds:

thanks for the review and I'm glad to hear that not all of the people on newgrounds care that it's short!

[just that person]

Ten

Holy shit, Purple Link's in a space laser missile barrage!

No, really. It was good.

Toba122 responds:

I thought it looked a little like link, but thanks!

[The evil fly 2]

A passionate tale of an evil fly.

I loved every second of it, fly obviously foreshadows Mario's demise, but it is done so subtly and so beautifully that I can not help but cry. Mario's death was one of the saddest and deepest thing I've ever experienced and me to live my life in another way. The blood enhanced the story told by adding a sense of horror. I would have rated it higher, but... It sucked. :)

mothballs responds:

You made a funny

[Paradigm: episode 1]

Lacking key plot elements.

It almost made sense.

metlwing responds:

true, those will appear soon! in episode 2! don't worry! thanks for the criticsm

[Stik 3]

Eight

Art: 8
Music: 6
Sound Effects: 8
Animation: 7
Story: 5

Could have been better, the backgrounds were good except the last one in the city, and increasing the framerate will do you wonders. Some of the effects were pretty cool, a pretty solid stick animation.